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The main thing I need to focus on is stating how my project will help my target group. They also think that it would be helpful to add more about how it is a research project and not an "end" goal thing and more about how I my work would be helping my target group and specially my action. They also gave some good feedback on connecting the dots between the research and what I am doing more, just laying out my project more simply and explaining what an EEG is and how being relaxed/comfortable can be shown on the EEG/how I can use the EEG to see this!
My recording of my presentation:
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